3-of-3 | Journey of Choice

Today I decided to share something from the rewrite of Journey of Choice. Praise the Lord, I’ve reached the 30k mark and am still working for at least a 60k novel. It’s exciting to get these words in!
So 3-of-3… the first three lines of the first three chapters. 😉
Chapter One
New York City, April 1861
“Shush or you’ll get us caught for sure.” Nat glanced around, taking in the details of his surroundings. One quick look was enough to show him that the street, though littered with trash and sewage, was safe enough.

Chapter Two 

New York City, April 1861 

“Up with you!” The voice echoed through the cell door before Nat saw its owner. 
Nat snapped his jackknife closed and thrust it into the worn-out leather he had strapped to his feet as a sort of shoe. The cell door opened and two officers walked in.
Chapter Three
Alton, Illinois, April 1861 
Lije’s head bounced on Nat’s arm with the movement of the train. How can the boy sleep? It was his first time on the train, and Nat wasn’t sure it was something he would choose to repeat. He preferred to be on his feet—in control of exactly where he was going—not stuck in the midst of a group of children, carted out somewhere west.
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Okay, so that last one was four lines… 😉 Couldn’t resist.
Now… I’d like to see some of your work! Let’s play this game two ways…
If you’re a writer, share the 3-of-3 from your work.
If you’re a reader, share the 3-of-3 from the book you’re currently reading.
And if you’re a blogger, feel free to take this challenge onto your blog!
Let me hear what you have to share!!

Journey of Choice | Quote Day 04

If you’re subscribed to my writing newsletter, then you know that nope, I’m not doing NaNoWriMo this year. 🙂 I haven’t done it yet, actually, as Novembers tend to be super busy for our family. BUT… I am going to try really hard to get 20,000 words done in Choice. Already I’m lagging a little behind and need to step it up. Prayers really appreciated as I’m in the home-stretch!


What is one of your favorite things about the Civil War era?

Journey of Choice | Quote Day 03

Time for more quotes! One of the things that I “dreaded” the most about writing Choice was the battle scenes. I’m not so sure I’m doing a swell job with the rough draft, but it’s coming. In fact… I think I like writing fighting scenes!

The following quote about the Hornet’s Nest is true history. A regiment is supposed to be 1,000 men. From what I’ve researched, The 18th Missouri never really reached full strength. But after the Hornet’s Nest, there were only about 300 men left in the regiment who were not killed or captured.

*spoiler alert* Yes, one of my characters that is close to Nat ends up captured by the confederates in this chapter! 🙂

Journey of Choice | Quote Day 02

Before I share more quotes, I just have to say, y’all are an amazing encouragement! I’ve not really shared many WIP’s as I go along… there is the pressure of people wanting me to finish this, and I’m just trusting in God to help me reach “the end.” 🙂 In the meantime, enjoy another glimpse of Nat’s life, and thank you for your encouragement and excitement!!

Yeah, I’m liking Zeke and Nat’s relationship. Kind of an antagonistic type of love. And then, let me introduce you to one of my top favorite characters. This guy is loosely inspired by my younger brother, Samuel. 😉 

And another character who “popped up” there is Gregory. He’s not a favorite of mine, but he serves a purpose, so he needs some room to shine.

The following quote is between Grits and Camden. Those two… I envision their relationship and am hoping to get that idea clearly on paper.